My new book from: Mrs. Gallegos called: pride and prejudice and zombies

So, in my book so far in my book, the virous has hit the town, and the older sister Elizabeth got a note from her younger sister saying she has left to another town and will never return again! So now Elizabeth has left to find her sister on her way she will have to fight many zombies. But earlier in the book Elizabeth and her sister were at a ball and while Elizabeth and her sister were dancing many zombies broke through the window and attacked some people but her and her other sisters were fighting off the zombies, while only one of the sisters got eaten by the zombie ( it showed the picture it was not a pretty picture!)! Elizabeth has left now has fought off a group of zombies and is now on her way to where she needs and WANTS to be....... With her sister! Some pictures in my book are kinda gross! One picture made me actually wanna throw up!! Sorry for hat information!! P.S. Elizabeth has powers ( not like powers like a wizard but has fighting powers) sr is really strong in one picture she was fighting over 5 zombies!! 5 might not seem like a lot, But it is because 5 FLESH eating zombies going in your SKIN!! Now does it seem like a lot??!!